Im digging the self loathing in your poems. i really liked 'My Nirvana' especially these verses
"The wind carried me on its shoulders
Lifted me beyond the sky
Higher than my dreams could ever take me
If ever I believed in heaven, this is what it would look like
but the more I try to touch what I see, the further it drifts out of reach
And I remember. This must be hell.
I always let myself fall into the purple skies
Higher than life. Higher than pain
Right in the middle of nothing"
I also liked Predator and Grey angels.. Good stuff.
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