I'm not sure how the actual grammatical rules are, or whether there really are any, but it sounds wrong to use nouns without articles the way you do at times. Your English is very good otherwise though.
Here's a correction:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel3010
New lyrics, this time about memories
BRIDGE
As I'm walking on the bridge
I see memories floating down the river
I see pictures of my past
Floating down the river
But I'm standing on the bridge safe
On the bridge I made myself
It keeps me from falling
Into the abyss of oblivion
That bridge binds my memories
Keeps them close to me
The river can't be tamed
It will wash away everything that falls in
It just won't stop running
Oblivion won't forgive
So I'm standing here on the bridge
Watching the wild river
We're just a flash in time
But some things last for centuries
Try to stay still in the river
Like a stone
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