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explosions-in-my-pants · 02-26-2006, 02:33 PM

in the chorus try one of the two

- focusing on one thing and one thing only.. bringing it to a hole new level

- open up the chorus make it short and sweet, but not too details and clean like the rest of the song..

just my thoughts.

02-26-2006, 02:33 PM	#13 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 924	in the chorus try one of the two - focusing on one thing and one thing only.. bringing it to a hole new level - open up the chorus make it short and sweet, but not too details and clean like the rest of the song.. just my thoughts.