Yes I see what you mean. Thank you from the bottom of my heart thank you for a helpful comment.
Like I said though, it's a personal thing. And I write other things [[they're in this forum too, if you're interested]] that aren't so so personal. They're way better than this one.
Yea, the first verse was rather good, took me 3 months to write it down ahaa. Not to say I didn't think of it before that.
Thanks again though and I see what you mean.