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Old 08-29-2018, 11:38 AM   #3783 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by MicShazam View Post
Trying to come up with a new style to write in.

I put some effort into this one.

Honest and serious feedback would be much appreciated.


It's by no means done of course. I'm sort of feeling my way forward.
Did you mean to go off time at 0:21-0:30? Could be an interesting way to go but if you're trying to create a less stilted sound that's more naturally palatable I'd say to adjust the melodic rhythm.
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