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Originally Posted by MicShazam
Trying to come up with a new style to write in.
I put some effort into this one.
Honest and serious feedback would be much appreciated.
It's by no means done of course. I'm sort of feeling my way forward.
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Did you mean to go off time at 0:21-0:30? Could be an interesting way to go but if you're trying to create a less stilted sound that's more naturally palatable I'd say to adjust the melodic rhythm.