I was harsh because it was necessary. His song was cliche, and cheesy.
I told him why it didn't flow, I told him to mix up his rhyme sceme. I told him to diversify his vocabulary. He couldn't handle a critism, so he made the idiotic reply challenging me to do better. That is the point where I told him flat out that his song was horrible. If he can't take a normal critism, I guess the only thing that sinks in is flat-out-your-song-sucks.
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