i think poetry or whatever this is should have like.. metaphores and stuff.. and when you have so many brackets everything's so explained and everything's so easy to understand that it's not called song writing or whatever this is.
it's just writing stuff everyone knows and put them on seperate lines
which is not art.. at least not in this case
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