To all the women I've ever loved...
...I guess.
I don't know where we are in the back and forth between "yes you can post poems here" and "no you can't" but I'm going to toss out a little piece I wrote while bored in my blog. Let me know what you think. If anyone sees any merit in it I might actually work on it. Anyway...
To all the women I've ever loved
I still remember your shoes. Those
Attrocious ballerina flats
or whatever they are.
You wore them without socks and I thought
"I hate those ****ing shoes" but
I liked them on you. And I
Can't remember what i liked about your face,
But I still remeber the rabbitt you traced on my
Back with your nails. Or maybe it was a 3.
I remember the city seemed to creep in
On the breeze through the cracked window,
And the lights and the cars, that reminded us
it was just us here. I remember when you held my
hand and looked me in the eye.
There was no reason for it,
but you seemed proud of me amoung all the other
emotions there in your eyes.
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