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thedaytripper · 07-08-2008, 11:36 AM

I think its beautiful. expand on it if you can, maybe a few different words here in there, but i enjoyed it alot!

07-08-2008, 11:36 AM	#13 (permalink)
thedaytripper Groupie Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 30	I think its beautiful. expand on it if you can, maybe a few different words here in there, but i enjoyed it alot!