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Jagz · 09-11-2008, 08:56 PM

yo, those lyrics are aight but it has no flow, may i suggest counting your syllables twice or maybe adding more compound words in. its all choppy.

a tip

if you cant recite it straight forward like you were reading a project

then its no good

09-11-2008, 08:56 PM	#50 (permalink)
Jagz Groupie Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 4	yo, those lyrics are aight but it has no flow, may i suggest counting your syllables twice or maybe adding more compound words in. its all choppy. a tip if you cant recite it straight forward like you were reading a project then its no good