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Old 12-26-2008, 10:07 AM   #84 (permalink)
TheBig3
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Yeah, you're getting there. Maybe juxtapose the smoking with the bad news.

The best thing for any piece is 3 days away from it. Your emotions change, but whats good is still good. It gets you away from the inside commentary that bewilders other readers.
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