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Old 01-06-2009, 07:20 AM   #27 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by mr dave View Post
if you're not concerned with the proper use of a language within a song then why use it? especially if, as you say, you don't even know what you're saying.

a song doesn't 'need' to make sense, but there's a difference between a song that is written to be vague and a song that doesn't make sense because it mangles a language. sorry, no offense intended, but...



kind of hurts to read... maybe try something like this instead

It's you, to whom I become true
It's you, that makes me new
It's you, and only you
Making me someone for you

it's not that great but it's not as broken.
OUCH that hurt.......I really needed to rewrite my english but, love that remake you wrote.

But well I can't take that seen it wouldn't be my....ahhh....almost type in mind XD well I did but rewrote it XC
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