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Old 01-16-2009, 05:48 AM   #99 (permalink)
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No. I brake up the lines, so you can get several thoughts out at once. This can be read several ways, one line is one thought, a pause, another thought. Strung together it's a poem. It's how I've read poetry my entire life and sometimes how I speak. Poems are sometimes meant to be read over and over to be "gotten".

"If you must talk to yourself," said the shrink lady to my friend, "do it in the form of poetry." - Ginsberg
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