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Old 01-23-2009, 07:19 PM   #83 (permalink)
Fruitonica
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Originally Posted by Yukon Cornelius View Post
Hey fruit "the rhyme at the end gives it a good feel". This is good advice?? So when i jump should i use my legs??
It wasn't advice, I was just saying I liked it.

You on the other hand seem to think that song lyrics should be written in a conversational manner, and that complexity is a drawback.

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