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Shoe · 02-03-2009, 05:44 PM

I really enjoy your writing style. Its a little hard for me as a reader (and a not very good one at that) to understand here and there, but I suppose if you wrote a book it would sell good to all them fancy dancy smartsters.
Anywhos I really enjoyed this paragraph...

"A pause. She knows me, she don’t know me that well, just enough to know I’ve got a few screws loose. A few cards short of a poker game. A few balls less than shootin’ straight. A few ants short of a poetic afternoon picnic. A few ounces short of a full swimming pool. A few pints short of a stocked bar. A few lines off of 20/20 vision. A few nails short of a sturdy foundation. A few cigarettes short of a pack. All that and then some."

EDIT: As did everyone else it appears.

02-03-2009, 05:44 PM	#112 (permalink)
Shoe Post Proggresive Folkcore Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Cincinnati, Ohio Posts: 393	I really enjoy your writing style. Its a little hard for me as a reader (and a not very good one at that) to understand here and there, but I suppose if you wrote a book it would sell good to all them fancy dancy smartsters. Anywhos I really enjoyed this paragraph... "A pause. She knows me, she don’t know me that well, just enough to know I’ve got a few screws loose. A few cards short of a poker game. A few balls less than shootin’ straight. A few ants short of a poetic afternoon picnic. A few ounces short of a full swimming pool. A few pints short of a stocked bar. A few lines off of 20/20 vision. A few nails short of a sturdy foundation. A few cigarettes short of a pack. All that and then some." EDIT: As did everyone else it appears.