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Old 02-07-2009, 02:43 PM   #12 (permalink)
Elvon
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Hello! this is my new Rap song, comment please! (: And tell me what you think. I dont mind if it's bad, because it might be.


Yeah..

I was thinking about what happened when you bought me a cap
You used to come and take me only for giving me a slap
It's obvious, all those peeple hated me cuz I was a punk
Used to play with those balls just to jump for a dunk
Nobody listened to my songs when i used to sing
First songs that ive written where hated so much damn!
Used to watch TV with friends when they really never wanted to
When they are bored they used to shut me off and throw my shoe [at me]
I used to have a bad time with my parents, If i wanted to I could have run from home without letting them know but I did once, and they just went afraid and I knew that they loved me (woo!)



And I knew that nobody loves me..
All they wanted is just to give me..
Smashing my head on the tree
Dont ever remind me! I had bad memories!

Memories..
Memories..
Memories..
Memories..


Opps..

And I do remember when you got me bleeding so fast
I started talking to myself and tried to forget the past
But it didnt work, what the heck should I go and do
I tried to call her, but she isnt there why heck! [Why heck]
I went to a boy and he told me to suck, and lick
He thought im g** so I jumped and gave him a kick
I went and started crying, why do they make fun of me
After I had a step home, I started crying more
Where is that girl that used to stand here alone
They told me she's sleeping there at her incredible home
I went running so fast, dude faster than ever
But just fell down on the floor and said Ill never
Run so fast again and again, nobody cares
so why the F*** would I have a friend???

And I knew that nobody loves me..
All they wanted is just to give me..
Smashing my head on the tree
Dont ever remind me! I had bad memories!

Memories..
Memories..
Memories..
Memories..

And I knew that nobody loves me..
All they wanted is just to give me..
Smashing my head on the tree
Dont ever remind me! I had bad memories!

Memories..
Memories..
Memories..
Memories..



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