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Originally Posted by TheBig3KilledMyRainDog
This is called John Frusciante syndrome.
Also, rhyming is something only the very great, and the very terrible do. On your climb to the former, under no circumstance should you rhyme. It is the dark side of poetry, and its seductive, but it will destroy you.
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Wow. That was good advice, I think I'm just going to take that. Iv'e been trying to improve my poems but nobody ever gives me any critisism! Not that musicbanter is here to give me poetry advice, but it would still be nice darnit!