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Schizotypic · 03-07-2009, 04:01 PM

Suggestions for revision: Go look up how to use line breaks for emphasis. Take all constructive critism you get and apply it. Spend about two to three hours on a poem.

03-07-2009, 04:01 PM	#105 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	Suggestions for revision: Go look up how to use line breaks for emphasis. Take all constructive critism you get and apply it. Spend about two to three hours on a poem.