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7gaugejames · 03-10-2009, 10:28 AM

O.K. youngsters representin'!

That is good writing and thick, meaty imagery.

Mmmmm Great force in this one, Jedi Poet he may be. Practice he will. Growth? He must. ( in my best Yoda voice) Control it he must learn,mmmm,
true test that will be.

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7gaugejames Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Imperial Beach Ca. Posts: 101	FaSho's Terrible writing Corner, O.K. youngsters representin'! That is good writing and thick, meaty imagery. Mmmmm Great force in this one, Jedi Poet he may be. Practice he will. Growth? He must. ( in my best Yoda voice) Control it he must learn,mmmm, true test that will be. __________________ I don't care who you are, Gunslinger, shmunslinger, everyone needs a good purse.