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Arya Stark · 03-14-2009, 11:09 AM

I really like it, it is strongly written.

BUT

If the grammar and punctuation were added, it would be more defined.

And when you actually mention the substance abuse, it kind of takes way the mystery. As does the name of the piece.

03-14-2009, 11:09 AM	#76 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	I really like it, it is strongly written. BUT If the grammar and punctuation were added, it would be more defined. And when you actually mention the substance abuse, it kind of takes way the mystery. As does the name of the piece.