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Stone Birds · 04-23-2009, 06:41 AM

good but it seems like your using too many strange metaphors. for example cardboard vessel, Han solo mold. maybe loosen it a bit so people can get a meaning of the song

04-23-2009, 06:41 AM	#53 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	good but it seems like your using too many strange metaphors. for example cardboard vessel, Han solo mold. maybe loosen it a bit so people can get a meaning of the song