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Originally Posted by Nicktarist
There's some nice rephrasing there. I thank you for your critique--however, we threw the lyrics out.  I'll get you another song to thuroughly critique....sometime...in the distant future.  |
Ah, well, win some, lose some! You are welcome, though, anyway. It was fun to think about someone else's lyrics rather than my own for a while. When you mention "we," who are part of your we, and do you work on your lyrics together? --Erica