Originally Posted by AwwSugar

Generally, I don't feel this piece is as strong as some of the others I've read in the past. I'd have to go back and read over some of your pieces, just to make sure.

My favourite part:



It reminds me of simplicity. And I think simplicity is the root of happiness.

My least favourite part:



After I read this, I skipped the entire poem and skipped to the description at the end. Had I not read that, I wouldn't have finished the poem at all. I don't think it particularly fits.

Well done, overall.