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Old 09-22-2009, 06:30 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by VeggieLover View Post
hmm, screaming children was supposed to give an image of the neighborhood kids playing under the window...screaming. Perhaps it is the wrong word choice, would you have a better suggestion?

Where's the other sagged? maybe im just blind, but i only see it used once :O
Boisterous seems more playful?

You used sagged in the sixth line of the last paragraph
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