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Originally Posted by wolverinewolfweiselpigeon
I guess colors stop changing when you stop trying to see them.
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I like the simple truth of this line, wolf. It puts the job of learning how to enjoy life back onto the person who feels discontented by it.
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The best way to die would be drowning in the grass,
Slowly sinking into the world.
But for now I’ve resurfaced, there’s distance ahead
And I’m happy treading Earth.
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Lovely stanza...my favorite in your song. "Treading Earth"...that's a beautiful metaphor for having the energy and drive to keep living and not give up.
I like the imagery in this stanza a lot because of your metaphor's physicality. I had never thought of treading Earth before. Now when I go outside in the morning and see the grass and soil, I'll be imagining swimming through it with my head thankfully still up in the air.