American Idiot Review (instrumental, reggae, albums, Celtic, reviews)

cardboard adolescent · 02-26-2008, 10:00 PM

i like how this review uses very vivid descriptions and interesting terminology
to tell as little as possible about the actual music
and make some of the most awkward sentences i've ever seen

~~Farfisa~~ · 02-27-2008, 12:58 AM

Always hated Greenday and always will.......nothing can change my mind about them

Rainard Jalen · 02-27-2008, 01:19 AM

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Originally Posted by cardboard adolescent

i like how this review uses very vivid descriptions and interesting terminology
to tell as little as possible about the actual music
and make some of the most awkward sentences i've ever seen

That's what reviewing's all about

~~mark1990celtic1888~~ · 02-27-2008, 03:54 AM

i like you Cardboard adolescent, you make me feel so special.

cheers Rainard, you know what its all about!!

seismojones · 02-27-2008, 06:52 AM

Mark - if you're going to post an album review for the world to see, spell-check wouldn't kill you. There are so many flaws in this review it's not even funny.

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Originally Posted by mark1990celtic1888

Its always discussed by music fanatics and punk rock fans, or people who like banging there heads together.

This is a bad sentence. It's not "always discussed." I would change that to "often" - even that's not true, though.

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Is are Green Day the greatest band in the World?

Is are?

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Well with the evidence of there 'GROUNDBREAKING MASTERPIECE' American Idiot album they well damn could be.

You need to use "their", not "there". And I think you mean "they damn well could be," not "they well damn could be."

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'The Anti American' contingent serve up a truly masterful array of songs that dig deep into portal of instrumental music.

I'm not going to even challenge the use "portal of instrumental music," though it makes no sense. What I will take issue with is your statement that Green Day are anti-American. I have a feeling they wouldn't agree with you. Do you even know what the album is about? It's about G.W. Bush (the American Idiot) and his fear-mongering via post-9/11 hysteria. It's anti-Bush, not anti-American.

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With the opening beat of hysteria of American Idiot to the mellow softening of Wake Me Up When September Ends.

Need grammar check here and I wouldn't use "mellow softening" it's kind of a redundant adjective.

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The vocal talent and writing from 'MUSICAL WIZARD' Billy Joe Armstrong are explioted to the full extreme of musical 'paramount'.

Need spellcheck, and you need to use "is" instead of "are".

There are too many errors in the rest of your review to go into.
This was a good effort - next time read over your review a few times to eliminate the errors, use spell-check and grammar check.

Aside from that, I do agree with you. I don't believe Green Day is one of the best bands of all time, but I do think American Idiot is one of the best albums of all time.

~~Farfisa~~ · 02-27-2008, 07:23 AM

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Originally Posted by mark1990celtic1888

i like you Cardboard adolescent, you make me feel so special.

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Originally Posted by mark1990celtic1888

cheers Rainard, you know what its all about!!

double posting bad..........

Rainard Jalen · 02-27-2008, 11:30 AM

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Originally Posted by seismojones

Mark - if you're going to post an album review for the world to see, spell-check wouldn't kill you. There are so many flaws in this review it's not even funny.

This is a bad sentence. It's not "always discussed." I would change that to "often" - even that's not true, though.

Is are?

You need to use "their", not "there". And I think you mean "they damn well could be," not "they well damn could be."

I'm not going to even challenge the use "portal of instrumental music," though it makes no sense. What I will take issue with is your statement that Green Day are anti-American. I have a feeling they wouldn't agree with you. Do you even know what the album is about? It's about G.W. Bush (the American Idiot) and his fear-mongering via post-9/11 hysteria. It's anti-Bush, not anti-American.

Need grammar check here and I wouldn't use "mellow softening" it's kind of a redundant adjective.

Need spellcheck, and you need to use "is" instead of "are".

There are too many errors in the rest of your review to go into.
This was a good effort - next time read over your review a few times to eliminate the errors, use spell-check and grammar check.

Aside from that, I do agree with you. I don't believe Green Day is one of the best bands of all time, but I do think American Idiot is one of the best albums of all time.

I don't think there was any need for grammar Nazism. He was writing on a message board, not for a magazine or college debating society.

~~mark1990celtic1888~~ · 02-27-2008, 11:49 AM

You sound like an English teacher having a bad day. Or are you an English teacher? I do feel offended, but i will take more care next time. Sorry World!!

jackhammer · 02-27-2008, 01:39 PM

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Originally Posted by loose_lips_sink_ships

Always hated Greenday and always will.......nothing can change my mind about them

My new favourite poster.

jackhammer · 02-27-2008, 01:49 PM

Sorry you have been relegated to the subs bench. You can win back my undying affection by posting about your new found love of Reggae in the Reggae section!

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cardboard adolescent ;) Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: CA Posts: 3,503	i like how this review uses very vivid descriptions and interesting terminology to tell as little as possible about the actual music and make some of the most awkward sentences i've ever seen

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~~Farfisa~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,773	Always hated Greenday and always will.......nothing can change my mind about them

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~~mark1990celtic1888~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Scotland Posts: 88	i like you Cardboard adolescent, you make me feel so special. cheers Rainard, you know what its all about!!

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~~mark1990celtic1888~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Scotland Posts: 88	You sound like an English teacher having a bad day. Or are you an English teacher? I do feel offended, but i will take more care next time. Sorry World!!