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the-hippy's Blog Blog Tools
Creation Date: 01-30-2009 03:11 PM
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hi guys baisicly im using this blog to put some of the songs i have writen i could really do with feedback
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Status: Public
Entries: 6
Comments: 3
Views: 3,462

In Happy if you want me to, new song Entry Tools
  #6 New 05-13-2009 12:07 PM
i wrote this song about this girl i met a few weeks ago...enjoy!
If you want me to
If you believe the way we are is the way we are meant to be
Then come to me and see where this road may lead
Cuz I could love you, I would love you, I will love you…
But only if you want me to.

I’ve only heard rumours ’bout you..
But hey, my pockets are already full with my gifts for you
They say you like guys like me…already I feel I know you right through
I want to come see you, but its ok if you d ...More Read More
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In Happy song:summers here-writen by: me:D Entry Tools
  #5 New 04-25-2009 04:45 PM
Summers here

There’s swallows and mud-pies
So I must say
Summer is here
Now watch me spin circles round you dear

But I don’t want the sun to set
Cus tomorrow morning your leaving me here
Our record together is coming to an end
You would rather walk away with someone I don’t know

I just want to ask you to come back
But I just cant think how
Why do you have to go?
You don’t know what your missing
All this time I just wanted to kiss you but I…

Your perfect do you know?
I ...More Read More
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In Music alone Entry Tools
  #4 New 02-04-2009 09:16 AM

Even though your right here
next to me
I still fell alone
No matter how close
Nothing makes me feel
so far from you

I’ve been keeping this locked away
Away from family and friends
I heard you mention the way you feel
I feel its not time yet

My heart is sinking
Sinking away
Like a weight
I need saving
You’re the only one who can

Even though your right here
next to me
I still fell alone
No matter how close
Nothing makes me feel
so far from you

You say you ...More Read More
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In Music Read my mind Entry Tools
  #3 New 02-02-2009 01:02 PM
a song about wanting to say somthing to somone important to you but not having the courage to say so.

Read my mind

If you could read my mind
You would know
How I feel tonight
We’ve been packed together
for an hour now

But its all about timing
It has to be perfect
She doesn’t feel the same
If only she could read my mind

Its getting late
The party is drawing to a close
She’s not going to hang around for ever
The question must be asked
You know it
Yet it cant be done
...More Read More
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In Music my first ever song Entry Tools
  #2 New 02-01-2009 02:33 PM
Can do better

now I’m sat here all by my self,
your dancing with someone else
Now iv got to find a way to,
to get you back now
Cant you see I’m slipping away
I know you can do better, but not for much longer.

You can do better of this I know
But your making me afraid,
making me afraid
That your being pulled away from me
By someone else
Cant you see

He may be a charmer but
When his friends come
Its like a kick in the gut
He will leave you
His friends come first
...More Read More
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In Music introduction Entry Tools
  #1 New 02-01-2009 02:28 PM
hi i just thought i would introduce myself
i am fourteen and have been writing songs for a few weeks and i was curious as to what people have thought so i decided to post them on here

baisicly this blog i am putting all of my songs (that dont break the rules) as the threads in the artists corner of the forum are my best/personal favrioutes
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