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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-06-2009, 06:34 PM
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Posted By Double X
One of my friends bands has a song that is like...

One of my friends bands has a song that is like (in one part):

People killing, people stealing
People lying, people crying
People shutting doors in your face
Oh, it’s become such a horrid place...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-06-2009, 11:02 AM
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Views: 88,150
Posted By Double X
Avoid using words like People, Everyone,...

Avoid using words like People, Everyone, Everything, etc. in songs. They just make you sound pretentiously bland without any ability to create imagery.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-01-2008, 08:38 AM
Replies: 170
Views: 88,150
Posted By Double X
I think it could use some more imagery. It just...

I think it could use some more imagery. It just sounds like a sad sap feeling a little happier.
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