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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-03-2009, 02:44 PM
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Posted By Nicktarist
there should be changed to their. ...

there should be changed to their.



there should be changed to they're



btw, that's a hard hitting line right there. Made my heart drop through my stomach it did.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-24-2009, 12:30 PM
Replies: 559
Views: 80,667
Posted By Nicktarist
man, you just churn out these songs like they're...

man, you just churn out these songs like they're nothing. O.o

peace,
-nick
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-01-2009, 09:12 AM
Replies: 559
Views: 80,667
Posted By Nicktarist
Sad isn't it? When people vote for someone...

Sad isn't it? When people vote for someone because they're "Nice". :(

Couple of awkward lines here:


maybe could be

And then:

instead
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-22-2009, 10:32 PM
Replies: 559
Views: 80,667
Posted By Nicktarist
despite some unflowing lines and weird metaphors,...

despite some unflowing lines and weird metaphors, you've got an interesting style. Definitely a thread to keep an eye on in my case.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-15-2009, 03:16 PM
Replies: 559
Views: 80,667
Posted By Nicktarist
haha, I love your use of words. ****y and still...

haha, I love your use of words. ****y and still resonating.

You have a couple of awkward verses (let me say them to myself before I continue with this crit) ------- ('stability' in the first...
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