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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-13-2009, 07:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,014
Posted By Jadix
thanks, but i wasnt really lookin for...

thanks, but i wasnt really lookin for relationship advice :p:
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-08-2009, 05:22 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,014
Posted By Jadix
Thinking

Girl you've got me thinking
but mostly got me drinking
and i haven't been this thirsty in a week

I named my whiskey Selby
and ill call you Aileen
i wish you both would let me rest in peace

...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-05-2008, 12:38 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 875
Posted By Jadix
Sparks, Burning ****, Fire, and Flames

I met a girl
In this dream i had
She said "Don't wake up!"
And now I feel bad

Like that time at the park
When I smoked all the trees
But I never got high
And now there's no air to breathe
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-03-2008, 12:28 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 834
Posted By Jadix
thanks for the comments, they were pretty...

thanks for the comments, they were pretty thoughtful.

I guess i chose the word preaching because preachers usually spit out a lot of bull**** without really thinking about what they're actually...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-31-2008, 11:16 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 834
Posted By Jadix
****in texts

i dont know how it makes me feel when you call and tell me that maybe the next time im in fresno you'll take the time to see me and when i say hopefully you dont respond to me you wait there silently...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-20-2008, 03:19 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,242
Posted By Jadix
ya thats kind of the idea. i wanted to make it...

ya thats kind of the idea. i wanted to make it ambiguous so that whoever tried to interpret it would get their own image of what they thought was orange and brown.

The image or feeling i get when...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-19-2008, 09:55 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,046
Posted By Jadix
A Wonderful Day

Such a wonderful day
As we all play croquet
And my mom is here smiling
With a glass of champagne
and my dad with a beer
and we're all close and near
and we laugh and we play
and my brother he...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-19-2008, 06:07 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,242
Posted By Jadix
well i dont know about that, but thanks. Its...

well i dont know about that, but thanks. Its kind of empty to me.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-15-2008, 12:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,242
Posted By Jadix
orange and brown

I watched as it came out
it was all orange and brown
And I can see
a little piece of me
on the ground
I watched as it came out
it was all orange and brown
you'd never guess
if you tried your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-12-2008, 09:36 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,663
Posted By Jadix
i hate soup

Take a course in discourse
and of course intercourse
state sanctioned aestheticism
and similar forms of racism
sand ******s and towelheads
love a trigger and nuke warheads
now to define...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-10-2008, 09:48 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,002
Posted By Jadix
I Want to Waste

I dont really care if you dont reply, but hopefully you read through it. thanks.

I want to waste tonight.
I want to waste outright.
I want to take my time,
and erase that curving line.

I...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-04-2008, 11:27 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,660
Posted By Jadix
thanks! though i haven't listened to incubus...

thanks! though i haven't listened to incubus much. you mean this line? (i just looked it up on google)

Love hurts
But sometimes it's a good hurt
And it feels like I'm alive
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-04-2008, 07:52 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,660
Posted By Jadix
new version: I know you dont understand ...

new version:

I know you dont understand
And I wonder even if I can
If you would only let me stay in hell

Its always been hard for me
When hanging out fails to please
And your love just...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-03-2008, 05:50 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,660
Posted By Jadix
1000 = 8

' deleted ' look down one post
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-01-2008, 10:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,632
Posted By Jadix
you tried to write a poem but all you rhymed...

you tried to write a poem
but all you rhymed was 'uck'
...
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-26-2008, 02:24 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,205
Posted By Jadix
Cool

Cool
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-14-2008, 06:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,205
Posted By Jadix
Expensive Lessons

The music behind this can be heard (without lyrics, as we're just getting into dabbling with vocals) here: MySpace.com - Sunny Bonos - Isla Vista, California - Garage / Garage / Garage -...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2008, 04:30 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,277
Posted By Jadix
while I like your message, your lyrics are...

while I like your message, your lyrics are terrible.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2008, 11:20 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,071
Posted By Jadix
i got a few responses at least, so im happy.

i got a few responses at least, so im happy.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2008, 10:37 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,071
Posted By Jadix
somethings wrong with your logic

somethings wrong with your logic
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2008, 12:43 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,071
Posted By Jadix
no its about my mom

no its about my mom
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-08-2008, 01:58 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,071
Posted By Jadix
mosquitos

Im a mosquito
I'll suck your ****
Puke up a fetus
And short its stock

Its the new world plan
Generation of piss
By ingesting a man's
load of penis drips
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2008, 05:38 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,535
Posted By Jadix
your prose overshoots your uninteresting message

your prose overshoots your uninteresting message
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2008, 04:02 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,263
Posted By Jadix
Expensive

i might add a third stanza. i dont know though. Think of this as a neil young type of song, especially "Dont let it bring you down"

YouTube - Neil Young "Don't let It Bring you Down"...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-03-2008, 02:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,335
Posted By Jadix
cool thanks

cool thanks
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