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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-13-2019, 10:13 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
I hear you. This poem is actually about anxiety....

I hear you. This poem is actually about anxiety. I get what you mean about it being too straightforward though. Thanx for your input
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-13-2019, 06:30 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Too Long

Waking up to the sound of screaming
Realising I’m alone and I must be dreaming
I must be dreaming
I must be dreaming

And this night is too long
Too much time to think about all the things...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-11-2018, 11:56 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Thanx for the constructive criticism. It’s always...

Thanx for the constructive criticism. It’s always welcomed and appreciated. The insults, not so much
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-10-2018, 12:41 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Raw

There’s nothing I can do now
No lies that I can tell myself.
This is all there is,
Nothing left to make me feel

Too long, I’ve buried myself in the dark
kept myself frozen in a lie
I didn’t...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-31-2018, 04:07 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Alone

I’m not saying I’m the only one who’s broken
I just feel alone and so beyond repair
And after my heart’s truths had finally been spoken
Opened my eyes to find no one else there

I think I...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2018, 09:06 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Bitterness

Every day feels the same
I’m waking up to put on a face
A face the world can tolerate
I practise words that I will say
When they ask if I’m okay
“I’m doing well. I can’t complain”
In my...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-20-2017, 05:03 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
This Love is a drug

This love consumes my soul
Fills my mind with delusions
Casts shade over broken memories
Hides the part of me that longs to be
whole
This love snakes its way into my life
Eyes my wounded...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-07-2017, 06:36 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Feel nothing

It's nearly 4 in the morning,
I'm staring at the ceiling,
listening to the wind,
The only sign of life outside my window.

All I want is to feel something...
Got so used to having nothing, ...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-19-2017, 06:59 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Lonely Perfection

His reflection is flawless
His loneliness, hidden by his perfection...
Not a scratch on the surface
Nothing penetrates his skin
He has a smile that never fades away
A lie that makes everything...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-28-2017, 02:22 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Dust

And i wait in the dust
Holding onto the past
Cause that's where my heart was alive
Before everyone left....

Now i wait in the dust like I've
Been waiting for years
For someone to come back...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-13-2017, 05:54 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Let me sleep

your voice crashed down around me
Your words as sharp as razorblades
You find all the right veins
You know how to stretch out the pain.
I'm so close to death,
But you leave me dangling there...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-01-2016, 04:56 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
To shatter

I look into your eyes,
Telling myself it's just one more time
Just like before
I find myself falling
'Til I'm submerged in your beautiful lies
And I inhale your toxic love,
My mind numbing as...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-25-2015, 03:15 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Following footsteps into the past

Wish I didn't have to move forward.
May I just look back at these footprints,
and follow them back to things we left behind
I'll try so hard to keep them alive
If I could just rewind.

Walking...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-01-2015, 11:03 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
lies

it's not too hard to make it through the day
Or to convince myself and everyone that I'm okay.
Perfectly placed words and a smile is all it takes
to make them believe I'm free of heartache
and...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-08-2014, 01:23 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
atrophied

I was lying in your arms
Waiting for us to become something more
I was hoping this is real
And that you really feel the way I feel
But my heart sank and atrophied,
waiting for your empty...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-04-2013, 06:16 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Lay me down

Shivering and awake, wrapped in dampened sheets,
I am forced to feel the pain and finally be afraid.
I may leave this world, leaving no memories behind.
Instead of passing on, I could just...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-26-2013, 11:52 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Twisted Love

So... I've been having a hard time writing more than two lines these days, but last night I managed to sort of finish a poem... I'm not sure it's post worthy, but here goes.




You took my...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-26-2013, 11:37 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Nope. They're just poems. Some of them were...

Nope. They're just poems. Some of them were written with the intent of turning them into songs but then i realized that i have zero musical talent. Lol.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-17-2013, 06:17 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Hi roxy. Thank you for taking the time to read my...

Hi roxy. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry/songs or whatever(Im actually not sure what to call it either.) I'll admit my poems do sort of sound like teenage ramblings, lol. I'll work on...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-15-2013, 04:22 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Dying flame

Im so cold in this place
And losing what made me human
I wouldn't recognise my face
If i looked at my reflection
I'm trying to say something
Trying to express how this place makes me feel
But...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-25-2013, 07:04 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
left behind

So tired of being left behind
And being at the receiving end of a goodbye
As if my love doesn't mean anything
It's just a way to pass the time

I don't think I could take another disappointment...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-06-2013, 01:39 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Frost Bitten

Frost bitten soul
Bound by a body he doesn't want
In a world he can't call home
With a dream he'll never reach
Surrounded by people he doesn't trust
They'll never know what he really wants
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-29-2012, 05:36 PM
Replies: 270
Views: 34,309
Posted By LuneLight
I like your lyrics a lot. I love how raw you are...

I like your lyrics a lot. I love how raw you are and can definitely relate to much of what you've expressed. Im no expert or anything, but good job.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-16-2012, 01:49 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Limbo

Last night i dreamed of running from this place,
Instead of faking it through another day
And always shedding tears of shame,
Always trying to win this game
But that was just a dream...
This is...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 10-09-2012, 05:04 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 14,924
Posted By LuneLight
Morning star

Forever his
Forever subservient to him
Forever under his thrall
Forever haunted by the Morning Star

There's always a light burning in the distance
Seeping through the cracks in these prison...
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