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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-16-2021, 04:08 PM
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Posted By Neapolitan
I really wanted to change as little as possible....

I really wanted to change as little as possible. It's your song with your words. I just thought 'cocoon > tadpole.' If it's midwest emo it's all about vocal delivery > rhyming lyrics. Like the song ...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-15-2021, 09:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 663
Posted By Neapolitan
I would change that one line to: "Partly undone...

I would change that one line to:
"Partly undone
Growing out of a cocoon of my former self.
Suddenly
I browsed my bio sitting the shelf"
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