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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2007, 06:51 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 926
Posted By angel18
I have to agree with either/or about changing...

I have to agree with either/or about changing that line to what he suggested. Other than that it's pretty good.

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2007, 06:48 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 68,884
Posted By angel18
Yeah I have to agree. I had lots of different...

Yeah I have to agree. I had lots of different imagery going through my mind while reading it. The flow was great throughout. Keep it up.

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-06-2007, 06:46 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,195
Posted By angel18
I really like this. It's nice and short and...

I really like this. It's nice and short and pretty simple to understand. Good work.

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-11-2007, 12:03 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 892
Posted By angel18
Whisper

WHISPER
© Jane Walker

A whisper in your ear
To let you know
They're coming to take
You away to a dark place
Where the brightness slowly fades
Into nothing but darkened skies
Words to...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-11-2007, 11:15 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 68,884
Posted By angel18
I really like this. A lot of imagery and emotion...

I really like this. A lot of imagery and emotion throughout. Nice work.

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-11-2007, 06:19 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,241
Posted By angel18
Thanx for the advice

Thanx for the advice
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-10-2007, 07:56 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,241
Posted By angel18
Everybody has their different tastes in lyrics so...

Everybody has their different tastes in lyrics so I'm not offended.

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-09-2007, 11:07 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 993
Posted By angel18
It's good as it is. Although the constant...

It's good as it is. Although the constant rhymning kinda bored me a little. You could also add more length to it.

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-09-2007, 11:02 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,241
Posted By angel18
I'm actually surprised with the comments from...

I'm actually surprised with the comments from everybody. I didn't know whether to post this or not, I thought that people wouldn't like it, but they do. Thanx

Angel
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-08-2007, 12:46 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,241
Posted By angel18
Smile Stronger

Ok I haven't actually posted anything up here for a long time now. So I'll show everybody something new from me. All comments and crits appreciated!

STRONGER
© Jane Walker

What did I do so...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-21-2006, 12:03 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 4,158
Posted By angel18
I'm doing the drum beat to go along with the...

I'm doing the drum beat to go along with the rest. You can help me if you want? Blainka
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-20-2006, 04:44 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 4,158
Posted By angel18
Hobo let me know when you have the guitar riff...

Hobo let me know when you have the guitar riff and your vocal then I can put the drum beat together for it!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-19-2006, 03:34 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 4,158
Posted By angel18
I could do guitar or piano or drums if ya want?

I could do guitar or piano or drums if ya want?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-18-2006, 11:34 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 834
Posted By angel18
Soemthin' new

Evil in the shadows

He'll creep out of the shadows
When you're not aware of it
Put his hadn over your mouth
You won't breathe not even shout
But he doesn't care
No he doesn't care at all.
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-06-2006, 08:58 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,051
Posted By angel18
Soemthing New

Black room
(c) Jane Walker

My eyes are wide open
Sitting in this black room
I’m feeling cold inside
This is the only place
Where I can hide away.

Furniture is old
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-17-2006, 06:34 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,460
Posted By angel18
Personally I don't like it. There's no flow...

Personally I don't like it. There's no flow whatsoever, but it was a nice try!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-27-2006, 09:12 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,216
Posted By angel18
Try and make the 'punk song' longer in my view....

Try and make the 'punk song' longer in my view. It would be interesting to see where you carry this!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-21-2006, 05:57 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,452
Posted By angel18
I like it Hobo. I think you should fit a Chorus...

I like it Hobo. I think you should fit a Chorus in, it's a good song.
But the Chorus has to be right to be honest! 4/5 ****
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-21-2006, 05:54 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,501
Posted By angel18
I liked it really good Hobo!

I liked it really good Hobo!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-21-2006, 05:48 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,998
Posted By angel18
Pieces from their broken hearts

Just wrote this fresh today. Just wondering what you think coz I wanna put music to it!

Pieces from their broken hearts

[V1]
She walks along this dirty old town
Thinks about the last time...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-21-2006, 05:47 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,422
Posted By angel18
Needs title!

I wrote this today, but haven't been able to think of a suitable title? Any suggestions much appreciated!

[V1]
Be prepared for my inspections
Be ready to tell me your confessions
Don't be...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-18-2006, 10:35 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 942
Posted By angel18
Rewrite of Memories Lost

Memories Lost

There used to be mice underneath the floorboards
Their cries echoed louder and louder
But the house crumbles to the ground
No screams for help, there's not a sound
Such an old...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-13-2006, 10:48 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 964
Posted By angel18
Last Time

Last Time

[verse1]
This is the last time I'll have a fit,
put my feelings in a box and bury it
Coz I don't want nobody to ask,
what I really want to keep in the past
I'm thinking of him...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-04-2006, 09:39 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,618
Posted By angel18
i agree with crazy luv some of the last lines for...

i agree with crazy luv some of the last lines for the stanzas just don't go right for me
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-02-2006, 03:24 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,028
Posted By angel18
i think this is good, probably one of your best...

i think this is good, probably one of your best so far!
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