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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-28-2007, 11:03 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,494
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
I see because the other parts in the chorus...

I see because the other parts in the chorus consently have flow so then that part broke the flow of course... make sense...

Maybe this one then...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-28-2007, 12:12 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,494
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
0.o that's new to me, but I never heard of that...

0.o that's new to me, but I never heard of that band though. also that part, you look at it the wrong way.


that part is together

to Either/or, it's "Lovely Angel's Song" to be exact, and...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-26-2007, 11:49 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,494
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
What's Sevendust"?

What's Sevendust"?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-26-2007, 10:10 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,494
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Lovely Angel's Song

this song is rock song, I wrote this in inspiration from BECK: Mongolian chop sqaud! XD

Lovely Angel's Song

Hey you, the air of love, can you hear me calling for you?
My eyes telling you my...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-22-2007, 10:16 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,998
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
there shouldn't be alot of rythms though,...

there shouldn't be alot of rythms though, probably distort the tune then
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-22-2007, 09:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,998
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
I agree so, your style are more to establish...

I agree so, your style are more to establish sceneries but there some emotions in there?? by the way I was able to find least 3 people to would want to play rock music with me but it's just leave the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-17-2007, 11:43 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,011
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
lucky you... <_< but I find you interesting...

lucky you... <_< but I find you interesting though because I want to make kind of music as you do but also other kinds too.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-17-2007, 11:41 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,998
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
O.O I think it's a bit too rythms don't you...

O.O I think it's a bit too rythms don't you think??? ^^! despite of that I can see what is the tune going to be for this one. lol
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-17-2007, 11:35 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,609
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
I see, but it's always like that when it's only...

I see, but it's always like that when it's only been read. other than that, is the grammer okay?

I kinda seen what you meant, but the tune i wrote required alot of rythm because without it, it...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-17-2007, 12:02 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,609
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Phrase of Purity, Poem of Nudity

this Lyric had been edited few time... so enjoy.

Phrase of Purity, Poem of Nudity

Locked up in a tower of darkness
Blocked out within my mind
Sing the lyric of despair
Though my heart has a...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-16-2007, 11:34 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,011
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
no problem, of course I have an interest of you...

no problem, of course I have an interest of you because "South of the border" note's tune is a bit similiar to "Phrase of Purity, Poem of Nudity" which i made it a month ago, only for the verses and...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-15-2007, 08:13 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,011
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
I agree with that fact therefore the lyrics seem...

I agree with that fact therefore the lyrics seem tonguetwisting but that just my opinion though. when I read it, I sychronized it in my term just for a test to it even if your songer doing it...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-14-2007, 11:46 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,011
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
nice work, I guess we're a similiar ^^, some of...

nice work, I guess we're a similiar ^^, some of my lyrics have rythms in every line. XD Evermore, when I read it, my mouth start singing on it own, it's a weird habit when i reading someone's works...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-11-2007, 06:33 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,251
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Heh, I agree with you on the fact of expressing...

Heh, I agree with you on the fact of expressing ourselves, it is an opportunity to reveal our thoughts wether or not people will read it, yet it's merely a message that the thoughts will pass on nor...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-09-2007, 07:20 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,251
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
ok.... so tell me, is my english poor when I'm...

ok.... so tell me, is my english poor when I'm talking to you guys????
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-09-2007, 06:26 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,251
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
I'm not French, I'm Deaf Canadian.

I'm not French, I'm Deaf Canadian.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-09-2007, 05:02 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,251
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
I don't know how it can be in poor english but I...

I don't know how it can be in poor english but I do see few minor errors though. if you're in USA then your english is different however I'm in canada.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-08-2007, 10:46 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,251
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Loveless and Careless

All my chances just had fall apart
I have lost my love toward you
It has been discarded to the bottom of my heart
I no longer have any feeling to concern
I’ve hurts people who have shown me their...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-13-2007, 10:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,321
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
well it's in Japanese style of who I admire, the...

well it's in Japanese style of who I admire, the Band group called "Lucifer" write this type of style, well I just some follow the style but but made in different topic as my own, like an example of...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2007, 06:41 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,321
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Hmm,even though it was edited by my music/english...

Hmm,even though it was edited by my music/english teacher... well, gotta find a new editor then...
Although I've never failed english even though it was my second language.... unless I wrote it as...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-09-2007, 11:10 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,321
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Phrase of Sensuality, might me rated R lol, not really

I've made different type of lyrics due to variety of emotions then it's only me left me down to this: Sensual Lyric. this song called "Phrase of Sensuality".

You’ve felts your body’s betrayed you...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-22-2007, 10:57 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 987
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
Simulating Feelings

When in times, someone’s feeling desperate
They want to take the “die-trying” risks
The risks are your life to pulls together or remain separate
Imitate the one who you are not were down in your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-28-2006, 01:15 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,385
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
nice but can it's be post as lyric formatted...

nice but can it's be post as lyric formatted paper work?
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-28-2006, 01:10 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,639
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
quite strong on the message tho and very singable

quite strong on the message tho and very singable
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-28-2006, 01:06 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 930
Posted By Kyren Tsunami
nice... please make it longer! XD

nice... please make it longer! XD
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