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Old 06-30-2024, 06:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone. I'm new to the site and this is my first lyric posting.
Would appreciate feedback on this.
I'm UK based and generally only write lyrics.
Regards
TB


Do it Again.
V
Walking through the city
where the walls have ears
Eyes always open
but don't shed tears
V
Dashing down the stairwells
for overcrowded trains
Stale body odours
rails rattling brains
C
Do it do it do it again
Same old tomorrow
Like a rainbow there's no end
Do it do it do it again
round and round the turntable
Do it again,Do it again,Do it again

V
Aromas from caffès
smells from the drains
Flashing blue neon lights
skyscape of cranes

Music

B
Don't let it blow your mind
leave all this behind
Jump a passing cloud
dreaming is allowed
Who needs hassle
who needs the crowds
C
Do it do it do it again
Same old tomorrow
Like a rainbow there's no end
Do it do it do it again
round and round the turntable
Do it again,Do it again,Do it again.

V
Strange Lowery figures
shoulders bent in the wind
A three chord busker
sparrows can't sing

C
Do it do it do it again
Same old tomorrow
Like a rainbow there's no end
Do it do it do it again
round and round the turntable
Do it again,Do it again,Do it again.

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Old 09-18-2024, 08:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it. What I kind of music do you write for?
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