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Blain · 07-27-2006, 01:12 AM

If you get an STD they will, Anyways you rhyme WAY too much, I mean every line or so has at least one rhyme it just would sound horrible with instruments unless you used like a Disturbed type of vocals with it, but if you meet anyone with Dramian's scream I'll congragulate you

Juggalo4life88 · 07-27-2006, 01:13 AM

Well, if you want to be a bitch, go ahead. It seems like you are the one that needs to learn the meaning to maturity. I wasn't aiming that at you, but you don't seems to grasp that. After the trouble I had with Bungalow, and a few others, I knew that some would follow in their footsteps. I am sorry if you thought that I was not accepting criticism, but for you to say what you just said, it makes me question your idea of criticism. It seems like you have the ego problem. And as for the anger thing, you don't seem to understand that not everyone is as laid back like a richie. Some have to deal with bull and it gets old, and then things get harder to deal with when you have to constantly deal with this crap. I can't believe you said that, I thought that you had a pretty good idea of thigs.......i guess not.

Juggalo4life88 · 07-27-2006, 01:16 AM

There is constructive criticism, and then there is destructive criticism. All that I seem to get when I first started this posting ****, was bad info from people. Now I get a few helpful hints and then they turn around and act like bitches. Why would I take criticism from somone who just turned around and made an ass of themselves?

Juggalo4life88 · 07-27-2006, 01:18 AM

I was simply stating facts in my statement, but it seems a few ARE putting too much to it.

Blain · 07-27-2006, 01:21 AM

I was just stating my opinion man, if you post a song in the forum you gotta be prepared to get good and bad criticism from it, I wasn't trying to pay it out I'm just saying maybe a little bit less rhyming

And don't compare me to Bungalow, because I am nothing like him... Besides sure he was a jerk, but he was one of the people who made this place interesting. And if you're worried about him, don't worry he's gone

Juggalo4life88 · 07-27-2006, 01:23 AM

I know, but I meant the way Raine decided to post that ****. I will accept help to make it better, but not if it seems like they hate me. And Raine did just that.

Raine · 07-27-2006, 06:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Juggalo4life88

I know, but I meant the way Raine decided to post that ****. I will accept help to make it better, but not if it seems like they hate me. And Raine did just that.

I won't apologize for my post either. Read all of your posts before my last one.
If you can't figure out why I said some of the things i said, then immaturity is the least of your problems.
It will seem to me as if you are rather insecure.
At any rate, I'll make this clear:
I will never read any song in this forum and form an opinion based on the writer. Not my style.
And I don't hate you. Although I don't think highly of you either.

And good luck with your future writing endeavors. I hope they achieve the criticism and praise you're so desperately seeking.

Crazy Luv · 07-27-2006, 04:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blainka

If you get an STD they will, Anyways you rhyme WAY too much, I mean every line or so has at least one rhyme it just would sound horrible with instruments unless you used like a Disturbed type of vocals with it, but if you meet anyone with Dramian's scream I'll congragulate you

I agree with that, but its this all right, if you wanna go with just that.

sleepy jack · 07-27-2006, 07:03 PM

Okay, if you can't take crits that aren't kissing your ass. Then don't post here, simple as that. Don't tell anyone to mature when you act like an overly-pissy baby cause we didn't suck up to you.

I could have been much meaner, and blunt then I was. I was even trying to be nice with it, which is why I didn't go outright and say it sucked. Since you're acting the way you are, i'll say it. That whole thing sucked, there wasn't anything good about it. Not even the rhyming, which for the record was annoying. In short; I prefer your cliched earlier work over this unimaginative, repetitive trash.

Barnard17 · 07-27-2006, 07:17 PM

Juggalo, are you 12 or were you just dropped on your head as a child?

You've come to the Song Writing board, a place where people post songs to be critiqued. Critiqued means people make criticisms of the song: they say the bits they liked, the bits they didn't and suggest ways to improve it. That you ignore what they have to say is dumb. That you throw it back in their face and get your knickers in a twist that somebody should say something other than "omgz lolz i luv joo" is offensive, both to the people offering critique and the guy that pays to host the forum.

Grow up.

07-27-2006, 01:13 AM	#12 (permalink)
Juggalo4life88 I'm a ****er ain't I.lol Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Bad Axe, MI Posts: 122	Well, if you want to be a bitch, go ahead. It seems like you are the one that needs to learn the meaning to maturity. I wasn't aiming that at you, but you don't seems to grasp that. After the trouble I had with Bungalow, and a few others, I knew that some would follow in their footsteps. I am sorry if you thought that I was not accepting criticism, but for you to say what you just said, it makes me question your idea of criticism. It seems like you have the ego problem. And as for the anger thing, you don't seem to understand that not everyone is as laid back like a richie. Some have to deal with bull and it gets old, and then things get harder to deal with when you have to constantly deal with this crap. I can't believe you said that, I thought that you had a pretty good idea of thigs.......i guess not. __________________ Ladies and gentlemen come here, major greeting Your keeper of wickedry, the path to shangrila Is missled by he, missled by you He is of your negativity, he is of your hate Meet the other half of the jugglin duo That is your soul The amazing jack jeckel!!!! Jeckel another j catch one more Theyll try and catch all thats instore for you How many souls will fall from the sky? How many souls burned wonderin why?

07-27-2006, 01:16 AM	#13 (permalink)
Juggalo4life88 I'm a ****er ain't I.lol Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Bad Axe, MI Posts: 122	There is constructive criticism, and then there is destructive criticism. All that I seem to get when I first started this posting ****, was bad info from people. Now I get a few helpful hints and then they turn around and act like bitches. Why would I take criticism from somone who just turned around and made an ass of themselves? __________________ Ladies and gentlemen come here, major greeting Your keeper of wickedry, the path to shangrila Is missled by he, missled by you He is of your negativity, he is of your hate Meet the other half of the jugglin duo That is your soul The amazing jack jeckel!!!! Jeckel another j catch one more Theyll try and catch all thats instore for you How many souls will fall from the sky? How many souls burned wonderin why?

07-27-2006, 01:18 AM	#14 (permalink)
Juggalo4life88 I'm a ****er ain't I.lol Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Bad Axe, MI Posts: 122	I was simply stating facts in my statement, but it seems a few ARE putting too much to it. __________________ Ladies and gentlemen come here, major greeting Your keeper of wickedry, the path to shangrila Is missled by he, missled by you He is of your negativity, he is of your hate Meet the other half of the jugglin duo That is your soul The amazing jack jeckel!!!! Jeckel another j catch one more Theyll try and catch all thats instore for you How many souls will fall from the sky? How many souls burned wonderin why?

07-27-2006, 01:23 AM	#16 (permalink)
Juggalo4life88 I'm a ****er ain't I.lol Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Bad Axe, MI Posts: 122	I know, but I meant the way Raine decided to post that ****. I will accept help to make it better, but not if it seems like they hate me. And Raine did just that. __________________ Ladies and gentlemen come here, major greeting Your keeper of wickedry, the path to shangrila Is missled by he, missled by you He is of your negativity, he is of your hate Meet the other half of the jugglin duo That is your soul The amazing jack jeckel!!!! Jeckel another j catch one more Theyll try and catch all thats instore for you How many souls will fall from the sky? How many souls burned wonderin why?

07-27-2006, 07:17 PM	#20 (permalink)
Barnard17 My home? Discabled, Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Bristol, UK Posts: 204	Juggalo, are you 12 or were you just dropped on your head as a child? You've come to the Song Writing board, a place where people post songs to be critiqued. Critiqued means people make criticisms of the song: they say the bits they liked, the bits they didn't and suggest ways to improve it. That you ignore what they have to say is dumb. That you throw it back in their face and get your knickers in a twist that somebody should say something other than "omgz lolz i luv joo" is offensive, both to the people offering critique and the guy that pays to host the forum. Grow up. __________________ Vita brevis, Occasio praeceps

07-27-2006, 01:12 AM	#11 (permalink)
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,034	If you get an STD they will, Anyways you rhyme WAY too much, I mean every line or so has at least one rhyme it just would sound horrible with instruments unless you used like a Disturbed type of vocals with it, but if you meet anyone with Dramian's scream I'll congragulate you

07-27-2006, 01:21 AM	#15 (permalink)
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,034	I was just stating my opinion man, if you post a song in the forum you gotta be prepared to get good and bad criticism from it, I wasn't trying to pay it out I'm just saying maybe a little bit less rhyming And don't compare me to Bungalow, because I am nothing like him... Besides sure he was a jerk, but he was one of the people who made this place interesting. And if you're worried about him, don't worry he's gone