Forever (inspiration from Crowe, but I'm just not that intelligent) (dance, tune)

TrampInaTux · 09-07-2006, 12:04 PM

Why can't we spin around round round the trees again my dear
Why can't we make the world disappear
with a wink of the eye
I'm blind to your disguise
Forever don't look so clever now
Why can't we jump jump jump all over their hearts my love
Why can't we look down on them as we stare from above
With a twinkling eye
You make me die
Forever don't seem so clever now
Forever don't seem so clever now
And all of the others thought they were lovers
But they were flings they didn't mean anything
I shouldn't get jealous of other fellas
But darling it's what I do and I'm dam good at it too
Why can't we dance dance dance to silent music
Why can't we take our youth and abuse it
With a wink of the eye
I want to make you die
Forever don't look so clever now
Forever don't look so clever now
Forever don't look so clever now
Forever don't look so clever now

sleepy jack · 09-07-2006, 02:56 PM

"Forever don't seem so clever now"

That was really pretty, like I really like this one 'cause alot of the lines mean something to me on a personal level. Its great hobo

TrampInaTux · 09-07-2006, 03:41 PM

I made it straight after my last comment on Crowe's... it's loosely based on that but it doesn't feature none of the very late future stuff... cos I'm to young and even trying to think of that scares me in a drop-dead-out-of-fright way.

I quite like it. I want music to this really really badly

I have the tune in my head and everything.

Crowe · 09-08-2006, 01:28 AM

I would also like to hear the music to this! The only problem that I have with this song is the use of the word "fellas" - I don't know, makes me think of an old western corny line and ... yeah I think that could be rewritten into something that would help the song exponentially.

09-07-2006, 12:04 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Forever (inspiration from Crowe, but I'm just not that intelligent) Why can't we spin around round round the trees again my dear Why can't we make the world disappear with a wink of the eye I'm blind to your disguise Forever don't look so clever now Why can't we jump jump jump all over their hearts my love Why can't we look down on them as we stare from above With a twinkling eye You make me die Forever don't seem so clever now Forever don't seem so clever now And all of the others thought they were lovers But they were flings they didn't mean anything I shouldn't get jealous of other fellas But darling it's what I do and I'm dam good at it too Why can't we dance dance dance to silent music Why can't we take our youth and abuse it With a wink of the eye I want to make you die Forever don't look so clever now Forever don't look so clever now Forever don't look so clever now Forever don't look so clever now

09-08-2006, 01:28 AM	#4 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	I would also like to hear the music to this! The only problem that I have with this song is the use of the word "fellas" - I don't know, makes me think of an old western corny line and ... yeah I think that could be rewritten into something that would help the song exponentially. __________________

09-07-2006, 03:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	I made it straight after my last comment on Crowe's... it's loosely based on that but it doesn't feature none of the very late future stuff... cos I'm to young and even trying to think of that scares me in a drop-dead-out-of-fright way. I quite like it. I want music to this really really badly I have the tune in my head and everything.