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Old 04-17-2007, 01:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Who Cares

Edited to remove any lines with a **** in it..


You know my life sometimes feels
Just like a crazy little pill
So hard to swallow down
Just like this stupid little town
They think they know me so well
Those guys can just burn in hell
Nothing, nothings all i ever see
Nothing is what you gave to me

I'll never change can't you see
It's who i am, It's just me
I try so hard i try my best
Is this some sorta test
Can't you see our business is unfinished
All we have will deminish
Nothing, nothings all i ever see
Nothing is what you gave to me

All started at the age of 10
But you never knew me back then
Family ripped apart at the seems
Shatter home and shatterd dreams
At 16 i lost all my friend
I wanna know will this ever end?
Nothing, nothings all i ever see
Nothing is what you gave to me

Mental breakdown, one then another
Doctor said "just blame it on your mother"
Who i haven't seen in 2 years
That pain brings back tears
You're the one who always held me back
Knocked my life of it's tracks
Nothing, nothings all i ever see
Nothing is what you gave to me


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Old 04-17-2007, 02:20 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Kinda hard to ready between the ****'s, though the point gets across.
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Old 04-17-2007, 04:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Ha!! Sorry about all the xxxx's......i geuss i could have used hecks or hells...but i was very upset when i wrote it...and the F's just stuck...
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Old 04-17-2007, 07:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Err.....no.
I got past the first 5 lines, and couldn't force myself to continue.
Sorry mate, but this is your typical cliche "I hate you, **** off" song.
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Old 04-18-2007, 01:34 AM   #5 (permalink)
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There....no more F's....

Hmmm..maybe it flows a bit better..no?.....ok then...

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