Wifey Boozer's Songwriting Journal

Wifey Boozer · 01-09-2009, 06:43 PM

Bump.

daren/MRI · 01-10-2009, 08:29 AM

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Bump.

Double Bump!

Wifey Boozer · 01-11-2009, 11:20 AM

Haha

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Where ya been PM buddy?

daren/MRI · 01-12-2009, 05:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

Haha

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Where ya been PM buddy?

;p been busy as hell in studio and whatnot...I need to get our EP mastered by the end of January.

Also- check out new MRI music video....see if you recognize anyone about 2/3 into clip ;p

"Helicopter Head" MRI Music Video

Wifey Boozer · 01-12-2009, 05:07 PM

Heyyy! That's me there at 2:23 and 2:33! Haha

I appreciate that, thanks buddy

daren/MRI · 01-14-2009, 05:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

Heyyy! That's me there at 2:23 and 2:33! Haha

I appreciate that, thanks buddy

Your parts in video are actually viewers' favorite parts as well!!! YEa!

Velvet Rope Forums: MRI Video: "Helicopter Head"

Wifey Boozer · 01-14-2009, 06:08 PM

Really? Haha didn't catch that part, that's awesome

. The mysterious chick in black and white smoking a cigarette. I like that image.

That's an awesome song, dude. You're going places.

Frozen Angel · 01-15-2009, 06:27 PM

I wonder why you break up your lines. Does it make your poem longer? No. It confuses me sometimes of how to read the line, or the whole sentence, and I have to reread the stanza to get it. There are no forced rhyme, which I like...you say what you think and your point is delivered well. Fix up your layout and put the lines together as you would say it out loud. It makes something that should flow perfectly too confusing for the reader <<<only my opinion.

Wifey Boozer · 01-16-2009, 05:48 AM

No. I brake up the lines, so you can get several thoughts out at once. This can be read several ways, one line is one thought, a pause, another thought. Strung together it's a poem. It's how I've read poetry my entire life and sometimes how I speak. Poems are sometimes meant to be read over and over to be "gotten".

"If you must talk to yourself," said the shrink lady to my friend, "do it in the form of poetry." - Ginsberg

daren/MRI · 01-16-2009, 06:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

Poems are sometimes meant to be read over and over to be "gotten".

YEP.

01-09-2009, 06:43 PM	#91 (permalink)
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01-11-2009, 11:20 AM	#93 (permalink)
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01-12-2009, 05:07 PM	#95 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	Heyyy! That's me there at 2:23 and 2:33! Haha I appreciate that, thanks buddy __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

01-14-2009, 06:08 PM	#97 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	Really? Haha didn't catch that part, that's awesome . The mysterious chick in black and white smoking a cigarette. I like that image. That's an awesome song, dude. You're going places. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

01-16-2009, 05:48 AM	#99 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	No. I brake up the lines, so you can get several thoughts out at once. This can be read several ways, one line is one thought, a pause, another thought. Strung together it's a poem. It's how I've read poetry my entire life and sometimes how I speak. Poems are sometimes meant to be read over and over to be "gotten". "If you must talk to yourself," said the shrink lady to my friend, "do it in the form of poetry." - Ginsberg __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

01-15-2009, 06:27 PM	#98 (permalink)
Frozen Angel Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 41	I wonder why you break up your lines. Does it make your poem longer? No. It confuses me sometimes of how to read the line, or the whole sentence, and I have to reread the stanza to get it. There are no forced rhyme, which I like...you say what you think and your point is delivered well. Fix up your layout and put the lines together as you would say it out loud. It makes something that should flow perfectly too confusing for the reader <<<only my opinion.