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Old 11-03-2009, 02:50 PM   #61 (permalink)
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It used to be tradition to name the song after the first line, so if you were to name your song there, you might as well just call it "Loose Ankles"

I used to not be a fan of highly cryptic poems, but I think you've converted me.

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Old 11-05-2009, 08:40 AM   #62 (permalink)
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poetry does not have to rhyme.

your stuff is really good.
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Old 11-10-2009, 07:32 PM   #63 (permalink)
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thanks for the support guys.
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