Jesus Christ I'm Amazing - The poetic updates of a madman

TheBig3 · 09-01-2005, 10:46 AM

eleanor rigby (if you weren't screwing with me) is a beatles song, shes lonly as does prefunctory things for no reason.

Thats for the feedback.

boris jawaka · 09-04-2005, 08:20 PM

yeah! i like this poem

its spooky and it paints a scary picture to me - probably because i dont knwo what half of it means

TheBig3 · 09-04-2005, 09:02 PM

Really? Which parts?

TheBig3 · 09-07-2005, 08:07 PM

This forum is mostly songs but how about a thread on other peopls lyrics. Are there any lyrics that just irk you in a song, that don't belong or sound right, that piss you off every time you hear them?

Ill start and say in that new Ryan Adams song "Hardest Part" when he says "or buy a baby doll for my girl."

Mostly because he's trying to sound all poor down home boy when we all know he's a money whoring Gap-ad-ing **** who changes his opinion to be hip and trendy.

That and the damn thing got taken out of the melody giving extra emphasis to a crap, trying-to-hard line.

Hype8 · 09-07-2005, 08:55 PM

I got a ride home from school today, and "How We Do" was on the radio. I hadn't listened to it in a long time (probably since the last day of school) so I was like, hey a little Game can't hurt. It was boring. I mean straight booring. And 50 cent's last verse was sh!t, it was edited so much things don't even rhyme. Come on. That was my "bad lyric" for today.

TheBig3 · 09-08-2005, 10:22 PM

Would anyone else be interested in a sub forum to the effect of the "song of the week forum" except maybe in this sub forum we would go over what we liked/disliked about the lyrics of a particular song.

I've spoken to alot of people who reference songs when writing their own, if we could have a forum to disect the reason those lyrics worked, I think it might help people get to the root of what they aren't understanding.

Anyone?

*Bullets_Love* · 09-09-2005, 09:09 PM

Im Sry.........Huh?

Merkaba · 09-10-2005, 04:43 AM

It's a good idea Big3, it would also help people understand the finer points by hearing other peoples views on a particular passage.

09-10-2005, 05:51 AM

^ yup i spose that could be cool

IamAlejo · 09-10-2005, 08:06 AM

Instead of a subforum...would a mod stickying it work to the same effect?

i.e. stick it (so it's at the top of the page on this forum) for a week. Then unsticky it and sticky the new one the next week, etc.

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09-01-2005, 10:46 AM	#11 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	eleanor rigby (if you weren't screwing with me) is a beatles song, shes lonly as does prefunctory things for no reason. Thats for the feedback. __________________ I've moved to a new address

09-04-2005, 08:20 PM	#12 (permalink)
boris jawaka Chrome Plated Megaphone Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Adelaide, Australia Posts: 163	yeah! i like this poem its spooky and it paints a scary picture to me - probably because i dont knwo what half of it means __________________ "Artists are artists, because they have an extra sensitivity - a skin less perhaps than other people; and the great ones have an uncomfortable habit of being right about many things, long before their time" - Benjamin Britten, 1951

09-04-2005, 09:02 PM	#13 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	Really? Which parts? __________________ I've moved to a new address

09-07-2005, 08:07 PM	#14 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	Bad Lyrics This forum is mostly songs but how about a thread on other peopls lyrics. Are there any lyrics that just irk you in a song, that don't belong or sound right, that piss you off every time you hear them? Ill start and say in that new Ryan Adams song "Hardest Part" when he says "or buy a baby doll for my girl." Mostly because he's trying to sound all poor down home boy when we all know he's a money whoring Gap-ad-ing **** who changes his opinion to be hip and trendy. That and the damn thing got taken out of the melody giving extra emphasis to a crap, trying-to-hard line. __________________ I've moved to a new address

09-07-2005, 08:55 PM	#15 (permalink)
Hype8 Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: california Posts: 191	I got a ride home from school today, and "How We Do" was on the radio. I hadn't listened to it in a long time (probably since the last day of school) so I was like, hey a little Game can't hurt. It was boring. I mean straight booring. And 50 cent's last verse was sh!t, it was edited so much things don't even rhyme. Come on. That was my "bad lyric" for today. __________________

09-08-2005, 10:22 PM	#16 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	Sub Forum Would anyone else be interested in a sub forum to the effect of the "song of the week forum" except maybe in this sub forum we would go over what we liked/disliked about the lyrics of a particular song. I've spoken to alot of people who reference songs when writing their own, if we could have a forum to disect the reason those lyrics worked, I think it might help people get to the root of what they aren't understanding. Anyone? __________________ I've moved to a new address

09-09-2005, 09:09 PM	#17 (permalink)
Bullets_Love Groupie Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Why do you want to know?? Posts: 33	Im Sry.........Huh? __________________ Gerard Way of MCR: I think that Everyone has had a time in their life when they felt that they were dying. I think that in that very moment when you know how important certain things are and how much bullsh*t other things in your life can be and that's definitely a message that we want to get across. You are most human when you're dying or when you feel like you're dying.

09-10-2005, 04:43 AM	#18 (permalink)
Merkaba Whitewater! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 2,885	It's a good idea Big3, it would also help people understand the finer points by hearing other peoples views on a particular passage. __________________ She thinks I'm a reclusive genius, she's going to be very disappointed when she finds out i'm a reclusive wanker

09-10-2005, 05:51 AM	#19 (permalink)
pastor of muppets Guest Posts: n/a	^ yup i spose that could be cool

09-10-2005, 08:06 AM	#20 (permalink)
IamAlejo Muck Fusic Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Virginia Beach Posts: 1,575	Instead of a subforum...would a mod stickying it work to the same effect? i.e. stick it (so it's at the top of the page on this forum) for a week. Then unsticky it and sticky the new one the next week, etc. __________________ a man, a plan, a canal, panama