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Old 10-11-2005, 08:06 AM   #41 (permalink)
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...seriously...a lot of brandston's lyrics make me want to kick myself in the throat...i think it makes it especially annoying that they are from cleveland... which is the scene i am from......
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Old 10-11-2005, 08:10 AM   #42 (permalink)
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...seriously...a lot of brandston's lyrics make me want to kick myself in the throat...i think it makes it especially annoying that they are from cleveland... which is the scene i am from......




and just to add...the fact that their entire last album was written about this girl i know...and that same girl now despises "the guy" who wrote them for her...kinda makes me laugh a little inside......and also...all of the little groupie preteen chicks who swoon over them.....ha....they dont even get it....
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Old 10-11-2005, 08:12 AM   #43 (permalink)
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and just to add...the fact that their entire last album was written about this girl i know...and that same girl now despises "the guy" who wrote them for her...kinda makes me laugh a little inside......and also...all of the little groupie preteen chicks who swoon over them.....ha....they dont even get it....
What's with all of the dots? Do you keep drifting in and out of conciousness?
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Old 10-11-2005, 09:21 AM   #44 (permalink)
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either way the worst lyrics i've heard.....
have to be Dir en Grey's enlish translation to ZAN posted below:

remains -ZAN-



painted with saliva
a paling body was
clung to within sight
a distorted picture of cruelty

even emotionlessness is rotting
dance a short life
the memory I saw at the end
you laughing... die

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Psycho while warping, revolving
Psycho cruelty unchanging
Psycho Past Trap
Psycho Past Trip
by.... Death Trap

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Lyrics - Kyo
Music - Kaoru


* The words Kyo mumbles here are:

you are not here
you are laughing
you are not here
I am not here

** The words Kyo mumbles here are:

you are not here
I am not here
you are not here
I am not here
I am coming
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Old 10-12-2005, 09:20 PM   #45 (permalink)
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Old 10-14-2005, 12:09 AM   #46 (permalink)
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Old 10-21-2005, 02:39 PM   #47 (permalink)
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So Im writing this song and the refrain is a bitch (as always) to come up with. What are your opinions of refrains, or songs without them? Let me hear your thoughts, and if you know any, let me know.
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Old 10-21-2005, 02:45 PM   #48 (permalink)
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a song without a refrain is not a song at all....
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Old 10-21-2005, 03:23 PM   #49 (permalink)
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a song without a refrain is not a song at all....
that's what I'd say too
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depends on the style really.

A chorus (refrain) is a integral part of pop and pop rock songs but many heavy style of music do not include them at all. Pay attention to the sound you're going for and if it feels right add one. I often will have similar sounding chorus's but change up the wording a bit if it sounds too dull.
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