coryallen2's Songwriting Journal

Stone Birds · 05-15-2009, 06:32 AM

Hey what happens to threads started by a disabled user

Nicktarist · 05-15-2009, 03:07 PM

It's great, not TOO hazy. It needs some work, but most of it revolves around you brooding over it for a couple of weeks. What really helps is when you put the song away for a month (work on some other songs in the process), then come back to it later. You'll wonder why you wrote some things in the first place.

Son of JayJamJah · 05-15-2009, 03:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by coryallen2

When your gone.
I'll be right there.
By your side.
no one can rtake you from me.
Not in this life.

I'll always be by your side.
In life and death.
Everytime I see you
I lose my breath.

I never knew.
That I could be with you.
through all of this bad and all of this good.
you've been with me.
I could never ask for anyone new.
Those eyes are so pretty and blue.
I can't dream of one day without you.

Just a short little song I wrote. It isnt very good. but there it is.

Wordsworth, Keets, Coryallen2

That Sounds about right

Guybrush · 05-16-2009, 06:26 AM

cory, your threads have been merged into one.

Read : http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html

Send me or another mod a PM with a link to this thread if you want us to change the name.

~~coryallen2~~ · 05-26-2009, 09:51 AM

I am sent from hell, your worst fears brought to life.
I come with no regards for anyone.
Now cross the planks of the burning bridge.
And this time I'll lead you to death.
I've come to take your lives, another step closer to death.
With every breath I take another takes their last.

Execute the mass and spread your disease.
No one really cares you're dying on you're knees.
Every inch of ground is paved with lies.
Your only concern is for yourself.
Behind her smile lies rotten teeth.
Running reckless a human race to the end of time.
Don't run away bitch cause your all mine.

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 05-27-2009, 07:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stone Birds

Hey what happens to threads started by a disabled user

Absolutely nothing

Stone Birds · 05-27-2009, 08:07 PM

How long is he banned?

sleepy jack · 05-27-2009, 08:09 PM

A week unless he makes multiple accounts and pretends they're his siblings in which case the ban will be extended for each multiple account he makes.

Stone Birds · 05-27-2009, 08:13 PM

he's been making multiple accounts?
weird

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 05-27-2009, 09:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stone Birds

he's been making multiple accounts?
weird

I've always had a secret theory that you were actually coryallen2...

05-16-2009, 06:26 AM	#74 (permalink)
Guybrush Juicious Maximus III Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Scabb Island Posts: 6,525	cory, your threads have been merged into one. Read : http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html Send me or another mod a PM with a link to this thread if you want us to change the name. __________________ Something Completely Different

05-27-2009, 08:07 PM	#77 (permalink)
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05-27-2009, 08:13 PM	#79 (permalink)
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05-15-2009, 06:32 AM	#71 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	Hey what happens to threads started by a disabled user

05-15-2009, 03:07 PM	#72 (permalink)
Nicktarist young gun funyun Join Date: May 2009 Location: Southern US Posts: 166	It's great, not TOO hazy. It needs some work, but most of it revolves around you brooding over it for a couple of weeks. What really helps is when you put the song away for a month (work on some other songs in the process), then come back to it later. You'll wonder why you wrote some things in the first place.

05-26-2009, 09:51 AM	#75 (permalink)
~~coryallen2~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: lorain,ohio Posts: 909	I am sent from hell, your worst fears brought to life. I come with no regards for anyone. Now cross the planks of the burning bridge. And this time I'll lead you to death. I've come to take your lives, another step closer to death. With every breath I take another takes their last. Execute the mass and spread your disease. No one really cares you're dying on you're knees. Every inch of ground is paved with lies. Your only concern is for yourself. Behind her smile lies rotten teeth. Running reckless a human race to the end of time. Don't run away bitch cause your all mine.