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Old 04-30-2012, 05:57 PM   #11 (permalink)
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haha okay will do.
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Old 04-30-2012, 05:59 PM   #12 (permalink)
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If you wanna hear what cigs and whiskey sound like, just go listen to Motorhead.

In fact, go and listen to motorhead anyway.
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Old 04-30-2012, 06:47 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I think Kurt was actually a great singer. But GB is spot on with his tips there, it may take a while to get used to projecting because if you're like me, naturally kind of introverted and quiet, singing loudly just feels... weird. But if you spend some time driving alone, it's a great place to practice projecting that voice with no one else around to think you're crazy (except maybe one or two people to happen to look at you from the next car over )

You sound like you'll have a pretty nice voice, looking forward to seeing how you progress.
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Old 04-30-2012, 07:43 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Question help with this song?

Just some ideas I wrote down while listening to Something In The Way - Nirvana (instrumental)
These are bits of my poetry, ideas of what I want the song to be about;
any lyric ideas? simple, straight to the point, not too wordy?

"I taste the silence as it infests my mind.
A touch of sanity and bitter hate,
Yet I need its warm embrace."

"It’s okay, don't pity me, please. I have no friends..but maybe it's better that way"

"My mind is an overwhelming mess of dark and twisted thoughts that have taken over and chased out the soul I once had. Maybe it's better for me to be alone with myself..I can't handle people. I can't handle the boundless pain inside me, let alone the pain of everyday life. I'm too bitter and hostile for people. I hate people because people hate me. I'll never live to be what I've worked for and I'll never live up to anyone’s expectations. Happiness is a forgiven emotion to me. If I have none within me, so how in hell can I share it with people? So I choose to be alone, because it's what's best. I've learned this the hard way over the past years. Over these years I have found my friend, they're in my head. "
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I have merged your threads. Please confine all of your own songwriting-related posts to this one thread.
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I have merged your threads. Please confine all of your own songwriting-related posts to this one thread.
but why?? then no one will see it
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Old 04-30-2012, 08:50 PM   #17 (permalink)
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but why?? then no one will see it
Because it's annoying, inconsiderate of other posters and completely unnecessary. Threads with new posts in them always appear at the top of the pile. So if you make a new post in your thread people will see it.

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but why?? then no one will see it
People will if they want to. Making new threads doesn't mean people will read them. We're not forced to read every single thread a member makes. I read a majority of threads, but I don't read the ones that don't interest me. I love song writing, so I may check this thread out as it grows.
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