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Old 08-08-2021, 01:10 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Ok here are my Lyrics, what do you think?
They're pretty cool

I picked up a guitar pretty much right away to read it with some chords beneath

I just feel that there should be one more rhyme in the chorus. The part with the dog is quasi unsingable, because of the lack of the rhyme (or maybe it's just me, I felt strange singing that part)


Spoiler for chords:
The chords were

Emin – D – C
Emin – D – C
Emin – D – B7 – C
Emin – D – Amin7 – Bmin7

for the verses, and

G – Bmin – Emin – Asus2

for the chorus
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Old 08-08-2021, 01:33 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Posted lyrics "Your a Big Boy Now"
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Old 08-08-2021, 01:40 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Posted lyrics "Your a Big Boy Now"
Yeah, those are the ones I’m Talking about
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Thanks a million for the feedback! I'll work on alternative lyrics for that line and get to you. I am just starting to learn guitar and can't sing to save my life, lol.
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