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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-09-2007, 05:19 AM
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Posted By sleepy jack
The meaning wasn't that hard to figure out, this...

The meaning wasn't that hard to figure out, this wasn't ambiguous or clandestine and maybe you should try coming up with a different rhyming scheme? Instead of AAAABBBBCCCCDDDD, you could try ABABCC...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-08-2007, 10:59 PM
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Posted By sleepy jack
Yeah, I gotta agree the rhyming is awful and it...

Yeah, I gotta agree the rhyming is awful and it sounds like something constructed sheerly to rhyme, plus it reads like you don't understand alot of the words you use you just put them into rhyme.
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