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The Erroneous Hoodlum
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this is my game/ theres the door, cya, glad that youve came/ dont let it hit you on the ass on your way out/ youve lost this bout/ you had no chance, you whisper, i shout/ my first thought was why bother? why even waste my time?/ you think you can rhyme?/ youre worst than all the others combined!/ worst than cheap tequila without lime/ to respond is a crime/ you couldnt sell your rap even if you charged a dime/ you think that i stink? stop and rethink/ you seem a bit dillusional, so I give you this link/ next time you try and battle, dont get so stoned/ do you like getting owned?/ you see, i cant be dethroned/ youve entered my castle, and youre just a court jester/ ill eat you up like Hannibal Lecter/ ill go off like a metal detector/ around here im the writer, producer, and director/ so put your money on me cuz im the best bet/ im the one who brings the action, now get off of my set!/ ![]() |
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Bright F*cking Red
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dont double post.....ass hat.
yet another great one fenix...you should look into becoming a rapper....
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know. Why do I start what I can't finish? Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers. My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it. But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore.. maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers.... Quote:
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,451
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if you know your rhymes are sh*t then why even risk it?/ if you wanna hang with the best then when you spit really mean it/ so your the piano man? your girl told me you had a little pianist/ my advice to you-think before you speak/ in the land of the rap gods there is no place for the weak/ and you my little friend are as weak as they come/ do yourself a favour and put those bullets back in your gun/ you think your actually good? man you musta been smoking crack/ vanilla ice just called-he wants his rhymes back/ I gotta go I need to put some gas in my Ford pickup truck/ SB might be ***....but you simply suck ![]() |
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Bright F*cking Red
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oohh....i like that one....
let's hear it fenix..
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know. Why do I start what I can't finish? Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers. My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it. But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore.. maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers.... Quote:
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The Erroneous Hoodlum
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I could jump into this battle completely unprovoked/
But theyre all avoiding me cuz they know theyll get smoked/ So they choose their words wisely, bow and stare at their feet/ When they see me heading towards them, they hurry to the other side of the street/ And really who can blame them? They don’t stack up to my skills/ Im running out of room keeping track of my kills/ So this isn’t aimed at hobo, sb, or pianoman/ Im aiming this at anybody who thinks that they can/ If you think you got it, then come and bring it/ Otherwise keep yourself clear/ Or risk getting caught up in the flames by getting too close to here/ Im not the type to jump on the weak, but im quick to strike back/ Still waiting for the meal, all these are hardly a snack/ It’s a waste of my time/ a waste of a rhyme/ Until someones got the balls to call me out, im chillin like brad from sublime/ The noise that you hear, is the people chanting my name/ Cuz I give them what they came for and I can never be tamed/ I leave them feeling like every muscles been strained/ I know ill be blamed/ but I wont be detained/ my record up to now is flawless and wont be easily stained/ |
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,451
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oh this is getting hotter fenix has returned/ spends a day writing a rhyme cos he's afraid of getting burned/ and I'm sure all of these other kids would have guessed/ that when you came back you'd carry on bout how you're the best/
well you know what they say-absence makes the heart grow fonder/ lets test this theory out-f**k off for longer/ cos although you may be talented the people have to admit/ when you use the same lines all the time you simply lose all wit/ you're like NWA/ you've had your day/ but now the spotlight has simply shifted away/ to a place where it matters not/ about the cuteness of your b*tches and the size of your glocks/ can you tell that I'm p*ssed off/ that people actually think that it's new material you've got/ when really your just thinking of different ways to say your great/ well now that you've said that-what else you wanna debate?/ nothing, thought so, now mobing on/ FENIX HAS SOLD OUT everyone sing along.... |
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[[la de da diddy da]]
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: NY...duh.
Posts: 461
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you guys got some style/i aint gunna lie/but hobo has to say bye/cuzz he' still a n00b yet/he's the same age as his post count, i bet/who is he to challenge Fenix?/hobo be needed a kleenex/cuzz fenix gunna make him cry/gunna fry/been burned on his other account/ now you may call me Hoffa/ or call my NY/ but its all the same/ im still playing the simon cowell lovin' game/you can't burn a flame/can't be tamed/SB is Bull sh!t/all written in bold/thinks it makes him gangsta/but i guess he just can't be told/hes prolly bent/prolly lives in a tent/outback his mom's yard/prolly can't maintain a hard/and now i just made an ass outta myself/the sh!t was random babble/but hey you can't get back in the saddle/if you weren't never on one
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The Erroneous Hoodlum
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spent days away? writing a rhyme?/
i dont write this shit down son, its freestyled each time/ so now you want me to battle? you think this is a joke?/ lets see how many ways I can make the hobo choke/ do you call yourself hobo cuz you smell like an ass?/ you dont take a shower? get your food from the trash?/ are you missing a shoe? do you sleep in a box?/ would you give your left arm for a pair of clean socks?/ now youre begging for a beatdown, like youre begging for change/ well i dont give bums handouts and im out of your range/ you can go back to your dumpster, and take your shopping cart too/ cuz theres no leftovers for you here, ill feed my dog before you/ youre a waste of space and a strain on the economy/ i can walk right by you, youre pleading doesnt bother me/ youre flows make you sound like youve had a frontal labotomy/ youre a wannabe/ a never gonnabe/ just another stain on the sidewalk where youre beggin for some sodomy/ with breath like a day old 40 and a few yellow teeth at best/ you need to put down the bottle of Nightrain and give it a rest/ everytime you try me, you sink lower like your credit score/ still want more? too bad youre too poor/ so go find a quarter and call someone who can actually rap/ offer them some head, maybe theyll get your back/ youre too weak by yourself with your novice attacks/ and you shouldnt be here alone, youre on the wrong side of the tracks/ you dont want to find out what we do to people like you/ who claim they can flow and cant follow through/ so turn and head to the shelter where you will be safe/ keep coming around without skills and youll get caught up in my strafe/ |
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