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Old 07-04-2008, 03:32 PM   #551 (permalink)
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Yep, there's two posts in the last day...
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Old 07-04-2008, 08:06 PM   #552 (permalink)
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those aint raps! where the freestyles at? whos out to network???? yay area style!
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Old 07-04-2008, 10:47 PM   #553 (permalink)
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Just toss out a one-liner, no reason to go overboard. I live in Berkeley, I've been in plenty of Middle School freestyle competitions at school, it just doesn't work on the internet.
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Old 07-25-2008, 04:56 PM   #554 (permalink)
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650623 by the time I'm done you wish you hadn't stepped to me/
you say you're stuntin/
sounds like straight frontin/
I'm no pro I make rhymes for nothin'/
But still I drop dimes like 13 on the Phoenix suns/
But still I drop fools like Stoudemire the chosen 1/
gimme 3 more bars and then I'm done
That's all it takes to drop you son
I could rip you all day just for fun
but It's not worth it, I'll just give you how much more?-none
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Old 07-25-2008, 05:22 PM   #555 (permalink)
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650623 by the time I'm done you wish you hadn't stepped to me/
you say you're stuntin/
sounds like straight frontin/
I'm no pro I make rhymes for nothin'/
But still I drop dimes like 13 on the Phoenix suns/
But still I drop fools like Stoudemire the chosen 1/
gimme 3 more bars and then I'm done
That's all it takes to drop you son
I could rip you all day just for fun
but It's not worth it, I'll just give you how much more?-none
Ya fool, ya tool, what a shitty rap,
the crack o' my ass could rap better than that,


yeah, it's unoriginal
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Old 07-25-2008, 06:58 PM   #556 (permalink)
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Ya fool, ya tool, what a shitty rap,
the crack o' my ass could rap better than that,


yeah, it's unoriginal
you get props for humor
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Old 07-27-2008, 06:19 PM   #557 (permalink)
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There are far too many grammatical errors,
within each of your rhymes, to give me the tremors.
You can't fight a war of words without a knowledge of language,
but kudos - you can be the filling, in my lyrical sandwich.
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Old 07-27-2008, 06:28 PM   #558 (permalink)
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You grammatically correct, arrogant prick,
your lyrical sandwich tastes like shit,
Grammar and knowledge won't earn you crap,
Go back to your books, you've got no place in rap
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Old 07-27-2008, 10:15 PM   #559 (permalink)
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Yo it's unbelievable what what some cats'll pass off as raps/
You'll get popped and stomped like bubble wrap/ Straight broke in half/
You can call it a freestyle if that's what makes you feel better now/
Excuses for sh*tty rhymes cuz it's off the head'er? nahhhh/
Better be a go-getter now/ Flow steady now/
Study the skills and flow better now/ Just don't me ask how/
An hour's worth of style in a minute now/ Admit it now/
A mile a minute with styles that's in it to win it/ No limit now/
Yo, you can drop words like grammatically incorrect from your broke-down intellect/
A punctuation Nazi's whats left/ Through all the bullsh*t/ Get stepped/
Like stairs/ I get stared like stars and gazed like I'm famous/
Star-gazed like Uranus?/ Ain't that sh*t heinous?/
I'll straight rhyme the same words like the lamest/
But my swagger f*ckin' overtakes it/
Check, we can do away with the one liners/
Separate you small cats from the big dogs and big timers/
I rhyme tighter/ Choke cats out like cage fighters/
Give you more hits to the head than Zildjian's at John Bonhams/
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Old 07-27-2008, 11:29 PM   #560 (permalink)
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Bird.
Turd.
Assured.
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