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Old 04-16-2007, 10:24 PM  
Ace
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After a long hiatus, this is what came to mind.
Not certain if I'm done making changes yet.




[-----Verse 1-----]

I need to take the time
To look into the light
And find what I've - been missing...
For so long

I've kept myself above the water
But time just leaves me, slowly sinking....oh
And now I think I'm drowning and I

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

Can't keep swimming in this current
State of mind

It's killing me
To think of all the times, that I let you down

I can't keep living with this burden
It comes and goes

But the relief - comes when you're around
Take my hand, and lead me out

Why does it rain on a sunny day?
Ohh
Our time always seems to slip away

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 2-----]

The memories of all the times we played
Have slowly, been erased by time - we miss them
But let's move on

We've held much too close, the dreams of the past
We need to let them go, but they linger....oh
And now I think I'm dying and I

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus 2-----]

Can't keep living with this current
State of mind

It's killing me
To think of all the times, that I let you down

I can't keep swimming towards the bottom
Or I'll drown for sure

So please save me - I need your help right now
Just take my hand, and lead me out

Why does it rain when we want to play?
Ohh
Our time always seems to slip away

[-----End Chorus-----]
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She would knock it over
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If faith was in her left hand
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