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Old 05-13-2007, 03:01 PM  
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Not my best song, but I kind of find it humorous. The title was a nickname for one of our other songs that we didn't know what to do with.


(Quote=George Carlin piece on advertisement and consumerism; music kicks on at "... actually, it's our way of saying, 'bend over just a little bit further, so we may stick this big advertisement **** in a little bit deeper (chord hit), and a little bit deeper (strum), a little bit deeper!'"

Verse:

Slave of the mistress
The dominatrix hold
On your knees groveling
Vomiting your gold

They feed
On your need
They take
What you make

Chorus:

They're on a sodomy conquest
A campaign of rape and pillage
They're on a sodomy conquest
Consumers, the prey in their rampage

Breakdown;

Bend over
Bend over
Bend over
Bend over

(Bend over)Their gonna rape you!
(Bend over)
(Bend over)Break you with false luxury!
(Bend over)

Chorus:

They're on a sodomy conquest
A campaign of rape and pillage
They're on a sodomy conquest
Consumers, the prey in their rampage

(Quote=Lewis Black; story about "where does the universe end" and the 2 Starbucks across from each other)

Verse:

Slave of the mistress
The dominatrix hold
On your knees groveling
Vomiting your gold

They feed
On your need
They take
What you make

Chorus:

They're on a sodomy conquest
A campaign of rape and pillage
They're on a sodomy conquest
Consumers, the prey in their rampage

Outro:

[(Bend Over) Their on a sodomy conquest] Their gonna
[(Bend Over) A campaign to rape and pillage] rape you!
[(Bend Over) Their on a sodomy conquest] Break you with
[(Bend Over) Consumers, the prey in their rampage] false luxury!

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Old 05-13-2007, 05:12 PM  
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I'll crit this later. Props on the Carlin quote though.

Lame angsty punk lyrics. How original. Still like the Carlin quote though.
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Old 06-03-2007, 07:31 PM  
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If anyone cares, I just finished writing the music for it.

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Old 06-03-2007, 11:08 PM  
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****, only clicked on this cos i thought it said sodomy contest son.
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Old 06-04-2007, 12:53 AM  
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Old 06-04-2007, 09:59 AM  
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****, only clicked on this cos i thought it said sodomy contest son.
Why? Did you think you could win? Crasy fool. I'm lord of the bum.
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Old 06-05-2007, 06:07 PM  
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I'm confused, is all your work instrumental? In any case, I think if you got some Tiny Tim type vocals going on this would be the greatest **** ever.
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Old 06-06-2007, 08:19 AM  
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Well, firstly, the songs I have aren't actual recordings. I exported the Guitar Pro files to WAV, then converted them to MP3. So that's why there aren't any vocals.


Plus, we don't have a vocalist.


And who is Tiny Tim?
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And who is Tiny Tim?
Tim Cratchit aka 'Tiny Tim'... is a fictional character in the classic story 'A Christmas Carol' by Charles Dickens.
He is the son of Bob Cratchit. The character is said to be based on the invalid son of a friend of Dickens who owned a cotton mill in Ardwick, Manchester.
In the story, Tim is crippled and very ill, near to the point of death. Nevertheless, he is a very happy boy and is very much loved by his parents; he is best known for the line, "God bless us, every one!"
His illness could be easily cured with the right money; however, Cratchit's low wage from Ebenezer Scrooge does not provide the funds to do so, and Cratchit dares not ask Scrooge for help.



"'No, no. There's father coming,' cried the two young
Cratchits, who were everywhere at once. 'Hide, Martha, hide.'

So Martha hid herself, and in came little Bob, the father,
with at least three feet of comforter exclusive of the fringe,
hanging down before him; and his threadbare clothes darned
up and brushed, to look seasonable; and Tiny Tim upon his
shoulder. Alas for Tiny Tim, he bore a little crutch, and
had his limbs supported by an iron frame.

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tiny tim: http://www.pcdon.com/-TinyTim-TiptoeThruTheTulips.wav
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